Poet's Corner

BUBBADOG14 wrote: ANY NEW MEMBERS WHO WRITE POETRY PLEASE POST HERE!! POET'S CORNER IS BACK!!!

Mind are too rude :laugh:

Hey anything is aloud as long as you * out some of the letters of the rude words or as they do on some telly programmes change the word to something similar!! :lol:

Gardening

The garden’s full of weeds again
and he must grub them out.
Damn it! Turn around and then
the garden’s full of weeds again

once grew one where now grow ten
some demon bids them sprout.
The garden’s full of weeds. Again!
and he must grub them out.

D.H. 2008

Here's one I did earlier. A classical triolet.

White Moth

White moth flying round round the light
cast shadows on my wall tonight.
I wish that I could cool your feet,
give you light without the heat.

Don't burn your wings my fragile friend.
such dainty limbs will never mend.
Through the window of my room,
You could own the big full moon.

Fluttering above my bed,
what pass for thoughts inside your head?
Now to my lamp in downward spiral,
must you be so suicidal?

You seem to love what you should curse,
this one small room, your universe.
Your passion is a mystery,
but may you die in ecstacy.

(I was young and romantic when I wrote this, sorry!)

Beautiful poem Will, you have talent thank you for sharing it.

Good one will. I have never looked at moths that way. Pretty short life!!