I always enjoyed being busy,
Loved getting gratification from my boss,
The feeling I got when my alarm went off in the morning
knowing where I was going.
But this evil thing took that away with the swipe of a hand
Leaving me with this dark tunnel
not knowing where I'm going
And now I have only time.
This is my 1st time at writing Poetry, not sure if it's correct, just came out of me!
It really flows and is obviously from the heart - that's what poetry is about - I think it's fantastic and very poignant. Big pat on the back.
I always enjoyed being busy,
Loved getting gratification from my boss,
The feeling I got when my alarm went off in the morning
knowing where I was going.
But this evil thing took that away with the swipe of a hand
Leaving me with this dark tunnel
not knowing where I'm going
And now I have only time.
This is my 1st time at writing Poetry, not sure if it's correct, just came out of me!
It really flows and is obviously from the heart - that's what poetry is about - I think it's fantastic and very poignant. Big pat on the back.
There was a young boy called Neddy,
Who was so in love with his teddy.
He hugged him and stroked him,
Then tugged him and choked him,
Now he's all alone in his beddy!!
Yes - I know it's awful , but can you do better? :blush:
BUBBADOG14 wrote: There was a girl called Joy
who lost her favourite toy
She searched high, she searched low
with no luck she let go
now her toys are weighted.
Okay so you're definitely better than me at this malarkey lol Good one Bubba
