Witty Ditty

Dorrie wrote:

tonypark wrote:

Dorrie wrote:

AHHHHHHHHHH Mr Park it was'nt the Ditty ,it was the content that pricked your male ego:P :whistle:

No....let me draw your attention to the rhyming eliment of your Ditty...Now please sit down as this might be reviewed as critical suggestion...IT DOESNT RHYME xxxx lol;) :whistle:

Perhaps you would like to do something similar and show me where I am going wrong. :blink:

I shall try...but even with a lot of effort..I dont think I can Rhym that badly....Ive a perfect ear you see xxxx :whistle: :whistle:

There was a dear Lady in Time,
Who didnt know how to Rhym,
She tried very hard,
In front room anfd Yard,
But couldnt get the last bit right xxxx :whistle:

tonypark wrote:

There was a dear Lady in Time,
Who didnt know how to Rhym,
She tried very hard,
In front room anfd Yard,
But couldnt get the last bit right xxxx :whistle:

Ok clever dick,redo my effort and make it rhyme.I have throw down the gauntlet,lets see if you are man enough to pick it up:angry: :evil:

Dorrie wrote:

tonypark wrote:

There was a dear Lady in Time,
Who didnt know how to Rhym,
She tried very hard,
In front room anfd Yard,
But couldnt get the last bit right xxxx :whistle:

Ok clever dick,redo my effort and make it rhyme.I have throw down the gauntlet,lets see if you are man enough to pick it up:angry: :evil:

I shall give it due consideration...throw a few sugar lumps at it ...and improve it beyond recognition xxxx :whistle: Shelly Who ????

tonypark wrote:

Dorrie wrote:

tonypark wrote:

There was a dear Lady in Time,
Who didnt know how to Rhym,
She tried very hard,
In front room anfd Yard,
But couldnt get the last bit right xxxx :whistle:

Ok clever dick,redo my effort and make it rhyme.I have throw down the gauntlet,lets see if you are man enough to pick it up:angry: :evil:

I shall give it due consideration...throw a few sugar lumps at it ...and improve it beyond recognition xxxx :whistle: Shelly Who ????

We shall see,but remember I stand by the content,though the end was not good,so lets see what you can do with it.

Dorrie wrote:

tonypark wrote:

Dorrie wrote:

tonypark wrote:

There was a dear Lady in Time,
Who didnt know how to Rhym,
She tried very hard,
In front room anfd Yard,
But couldnt get the last bit right xxxx :whistle:

Ok clever dick,redo my effort and make it rhyme.I have throw down the gauntlet,lets see if you are man enough to pick it up:angry: :evil:

I shall give it due consideration...throw a few sugar lumps at it ...and improve it beyond recognition xxxx :whistle: Shelly Who ????

We shall see,but remember I stand by the content,though the end was not good,so lets see what you can do with it.

Stand by Your content if you so wish...all be it a muddled and sexist thing to stand by....and after Ive been Inspired I shall make efforts to Scan your Ditty xxxx :whistle: :silly: